Love In A Mist

Love In A Mist

You are my dream
You are my world
The mist moves in
You faded away

When I needed you
You were not here
Who do I blame?
Doubt haunts me
Like a veil of mist

(Chorus)
The flower
Oh, how pretty blue
Your thorns ward me off
But I see past it
Love in a mist

After the mist clears
I see you standing
You tell me its okay
Why did I doubt you?
You are still my world


(Chorus)


Like a star in the sky
You are always there
No matter what


(Chorus)


Love in a mist
Love in a mist
Love in a mist
Love in a mist



I liked this challenge. I used to write poetry back in the day, so this reminded me of those days. The song is the story of a girl and boy in love, but one doubts the other's love. The girl's thoughts are in the verses and the boy's thoughts are in the chorus. Will I write another song? Probably not. Song writing is hard, and I commend people who do it. Songs have a certain structure. Maybe I'm just not used to the structure, but I will stick with writing fiction. The challenge was fun though; it definitely challenged me to write something that is different than what I'm used to.